Madie Ziegler show not tell

Maddie Ziegler

I heard the crowd cheering at the top of their lungs

I heard my mum saying my magic Maddie

I saw the The crowd steering like googly eyes staring at you

I felt tired from dancing as hard as the best dancer in the world

I felt so happy when I found out I won

I wondered if I would get through to the finals

I wondered if  my dad would come if I got into the finals

I wondered what dance I would do if I got into the finals

WALT use Similes and Alliteration to make a pitcher in the readers mind. We have been doing writing to make the reader have an image in their mind. We have learnt it because it will help us have interesting writing we have learnt it by the teacher telling us how to do it then we have to put it into our writing. I enjoyed getting the pitcher.

Sophie Pascoe

People screaming my name at the top of their lungs like a lion roaring Shouting go! go! go! go! Sophie! People chanting go, Sophie!go Sophie As loud as they can I can hear Dad cheering louder than anyone else when I pop out of the water I could hear some of the crowd cheering go superstar Sophie I could see the finish line just meters away I could see people jumping up and down the closer I got to the finishing line the closer I got the faster they jumped and the higher they jumped they jumped like kangaroos. I felt happy about how far I’d gotten so far My eyes filled with tears I felt nervous if I Will make it My heart pumping in my chest 10 times faster than before

Alliteration

Walt: make something on spark to explain Alliteration. We have been making a video on spark to explain Alliteration and make examples for Alliteration. we are learning Alliteration to help us with learning we have learnt Alliteration by Mrs Hoffman teaching us then we had to put some into our writing. I enjoyed making it because it was fun. I found it challenging recording.

WALT: we are learning to use similes and how to use spark. I enjoyed making it because it was fun. I found it challenging to use spark because it was hard to do everything

similes

WALT to make a creation on spark about similes I enjoyed making it I found it challenging doing the recording

right place, right time, online

Walt: make a poster about being in the right place, right time, online. we have been doing a poster for 2 days about being in the right place, right time, online. we have been learning this because it will help us with our digital footprint. I enjoyed making this because it was fun.

recycling poster

Walt: make a poster about recycling.
To find out the information about this we had to go on the Greymouth council recycling website.
We were doing this because we were finding random stuff in our bins.
I enjoyed everything about making it.
My most challenging moment was posting this.