Thursday 15 June 2017



WALT: we are learning to use similes and how to use spark. I enjoyed making it because it was fun. I found it challenging to use spark because it was hard to do everything The Dark Stormy Night

1 comment:

  1. hi Grace W
    I like your work maybe next time you could add a pitcher around your title and don't repeat some of the same thing maybe you could wright what you felt and what you wondered

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